That was touching, Dondons...very much hit my heart heavy. You have a true gift and should share it with the world. Perhaps you've already looked into a publisher, if not, why not?
I can't speak for others, but personally I really enjoy your poems and I appreciate you sharing them. Yes, they are sad, but they are real and deep and very well written. Looking forward to read more xx
In my opinion, these are open fourms and if one doesn't like what another writes, it's their choice to leave, simple as that! However, my standpoint, you writing is just fine and many can see that writing down your pain, can also be healing.
I actually didn't go to the doctor, you must have confused that part with someone else (which is not hard to do with so many people here...) I did mention my diziness and headaches (so maybe that's what you remember?) but they're gone now (for now at least), I really appreciate your concern, thank you I hope you are doing well. Best wishes xx
These poems are great its nice for the person posting them to speak and put into words how they are really feeling please post more they can help others david