Just because you don't see me cry, it doesn't mean that I'm not sad
Just because I seem to have a lot, it doesn't mean I have
Just because I laugh and Joke and smile a lot of the time, it doesn't mean I'm happy, It doesn't mean I'm fine
If only you could understand, if only you could see, that the girl you see on the outside is not the real me!
X
It almost makes me cry to read this. It's so touching. Thank you for sharing your poems with us! xx
Tinkara have i messaged you before the nsme sounds familiar ? Dondons the poems lovely.! David
Really nice poem but sad because you can relate and feel the pain in those words xx
Well, I'm pretty sure we've been in the same discussion before, because I remember your name as well xx
also sorry, I don't mean to upset anyone with my poems, I hope I don't? Xx
Thats it ! Are you feeling any better ! Did you get to your doctor i remember you now ! Did your doctor help you ! David
Please dont stop posting them they are appreciated thanks david
Thank you for sharing this poem, this is very true for a lot of people.
Elizabeth.
That was touching, Dondons...very much hit my heart heavy. You have a true gift and should share it with the world. Perhaps you've already looked into a publisher, if not, why not?
Again, thank you for sharing
Frustrated
I can't speak for others, but personally I really enjoy your poems and I appreciate you sharing them. Yes, they are sad, but they are real and deep and very well written. Looking forward to read more xx
In my opinion, these are open fourms and if one doesn't like what another writes, it's their choice to leave, simple as that! However, my standpoint, you writing is just fine and many can see that writing down your pain, can also be healing.
Warmly,
Frustrated
I actually didn't go to the doctor, you must have confused that part with someone else (which is not hard to do with so many people here...) I did mention my diziness and headaches (so maybe that's what you remember?) but they're gone now (for now at least), I really appreciate your concern, thank you
I hope you are doing well. Best wishes xx
No not looked into a publisher, it's just something that I do, they're really not that good but thank you you're very kind xxx
thank you again everyone, I will put more on if I don't offend xx
These poems are great its nice for the person posting them to speak and put into words how they are really feeling please post more they can help others david
Brought a lump to my throat, so beautiful. xxx
Dondons Thank you. I loved your poem.
Please keep writing them it helps everyone
With love Linda. X