'Poem'

Mental health
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I try to change things in every way, but nothing's ever different, it's just like Groundhog Day 

The same bad things repeating over and over, where's my luck? Where's my four leaf clover?

I don't know why I bother even wanting more as things just stay as they were before 

I have to lie in it for I have made my bed, try to stop thinking of what could have been instead 

So I'll let things play out even though they're not that great, but my life is what it is, maybe is just fate?

So I won't try to change things cos what will be will be, the sooner that I realise that the sooner that I'll see 

That most things in life are beyond our control, we're just pawns in life's game, I'm just playing my role! 

X 

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Another  lump in the throat moment..........the last four lines are awesome hun. 

 

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Thank you you're very kind xxx

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Hi dondons, you really have a true talent, words are so much more alive but poignant when they are written from the heart.....

You should compile a selection of your poetry and maybe ask a publisher's advice and critique of your work... you can contribute to

Very many mental health and depression or any other problems that affect people's every day life.... I am sure that your work ( as they are. Clearly written from your health and psyche ) would be very much appreciated.... I wish you look and an easing of your stress and low moods... very best. Wishes to you... xxx

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Thank you Deirdre but I don't think I could do that right now, but maybe in the future it's something I might think about although I'm not so sure they're good enough, I just write them for my own benefit but have shared some on here in the hope that people may relate and also it's easier than actually writing about my problems (if that makes sense) xx